Thursday, October 30th, 2008...2:40 pm
Poems
I know I just posted, like, 2 seconds ago but I wanted to post these two poems I have written. The first one is for a writing contest so I would like some feedback please!
Home
Home.
Our
Messy and
Exuberant home
Irksome
Sometimes
Wonderful
Home.
Embracing us and
Radiating
Exultant beauty.
Therefore
Home
Enters our
Hearts forever.
Emulsifies us with others.
Always
Renders us
Thankful.
Impossibly
Sound and soothing.
.
Ruthless sometimes?
I think not.
Good and welcoming
Home.
Time to go home.
?
What are the birds singing for.
I couldn’t think of what the birds were singing for,
Not till just now.
They are singing for the crow who died,
And was buried by his Master’s side.
Don’t know who his Master was.
They are singing for the crow who died.
I couldn’t think of what the birds were singing for,
Not till just now.
They are singing for the wren,
Who won’t come out of his den.
Telling him to get up, it’s morning!
They are singing for the wren.
I couldn’t think of what the birds were singing for,
Not till just now.
They are singing for the robin,
Who don’t know that it’s mornin’
Telling him it’s not afternoon.
They are singing for the robin.
Dreamer
3 Comments
October 30th, 2008 at 8:16 pm
I especially love the second poem, and that’s a *great* header.
November 18th, 2008 at 11:15 am
That is so cool Tigger I wish I could think of things like that.
November 18th, 2008 at 11:56 am
I quite like the first one. I have about 30 years on you, and Messy, Exuberant, and Irksome Sometimes hits the nail on the head! Good luck with the writing contest and let us know how it comes. We’re getting ready to leave for a family holiday, but when we return I plan to sit down with a cup of tea and read all about Tralonia. Best wishes!
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